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Submitted: March 28, 2007
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As I was drawing Mordad, I got it into my head to draw his NAUGHT BITS. However, erasing a stray line, the paper.... CRUMPLED right across hie legs and hip. My eyes watered tearfully... alas... my plot for a porntastic Mordad... FAILED!

If you can't tell, I'm trying to assimilate something similar to how ~buttermuffin draws Mordad, 'cause that's perfection with a slice of toast. Or in this case, a buttered muffin.

Art ©2007 L.E. Snyder
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~furret-girl:iconfurret-girl: Mar 28, 2007, 12:19:38 PM
Wow, I really like the proportions. ^_^- he's sexy XD

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*ridia:iconridia: Mar 28, 2007, 12:53:39 PM
Thanks!

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~Raniko:iconRaniko: Mar 28, 2007, 1:07:20 PM
BUTTERED MUFFIN <3

Well, if you want advanced critique... I have to say everything looks gorgeous. But the eyes seem close together if you ask me. I like to use that invisible eye rule, where the distance between two eyes is far enough to fit one more eye in the middle. Either that, or they're a bit big for the face... oo;

I hope that's helpful? I could be wrong, my glasses aren't on cause I can't find them.

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~Bedwyr-Bedrydant:iconBedwyr-Bedrydant: Mar 28, 2007, 1:31:44 PM
Very nice =)

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Gloria Perpetua!
~furret-girl:iconfurret-girl: Mar 28, 2007, 1:59:42 PM
you're welcome. ^_^

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*ridia:iconridia: Mar 28, 2007, 3:49:32 PM
I think the problem is more in the shape I used for his face being off, and my apparent indecision as to wether it's a human or cat nose. xD It confuses the angle of the eye/nose/mouth setup. Think that sounds about right?

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~Raniko:iconRaniko: Mar 28, 2007, 3:56:26 PM
Hmmm.. Yeah, I can see that. I thought you were drawing him human on purpose. xD

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*ridia:iconridia: Mar 28, 2007, 3:59:30 PM
I wasn't sure what I was drawing. He's a cat-anthro, but I don't like to draw cat-heads... and I'm unsure about cat noses. xD

YAY VAGUE STYLES!

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~Raniko:iconRaniko: Mar 28, 2007, 5:03:20 PM
Hehe. x) <3 I like it a lot either way.

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